The Writer's Lounge

The winner of this weeks theme is, Beautiful Altar. The title of their writing is "Hot Ice"
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Kirsten worked as the co-manager at the hottest job in Las Vegas called Pure which is an expensive club. It is late and the party is banging when Kirsten arrives in her Jaguar she steps out with a sophiscated dress on from Versace her keys fall from her hand onto the ground. Kirsten bends down and a hand tocuhes hers which send chills down her back and the guy has Kirsten's keys in his hand when they stand both up they glazw into each other's eyes. "Miss here is your keys." he said. "Thanks so much and sir what is your name?" Kirsten asked. " Francis!" he said "Kirsten!" she said." Can I buy you a drink?" Francis asked. "That would be great!"she said. Both of them walked inside together and proceeded over to the bar. The bartender Jason said hello to Kirsten and she replied with "Hi Jason." Francis asked the bartender did they know each other. "Kirsten is the co-manager of this club everyone knows about Kirsten. "What will you be having?" Jason asked Francis. "A Bacardi Mojito and for you my lady, the usual, a Pina Colada with a cherry on top!" Kirsten said. "Ok, well let's shake and drink!" Jason said. Jason sat their drinks down and they drink them down.

The DJ was playing the song "2 Man Show." Francis got up and asked Kirsten if she wanted to dance. Kirsten laid out her hand which was smooth like a babies bottom he held her hand softly. The two of them danced away all night unti; the club close at two o' clock. When it was time they went outside to Kirsten's car and he told her that he is the CEO/Founder of Science and Math Futuristic, Italain born of the famous car designer Cosimo. Very interested in him they talked so long she invited him over to her palce.

When she got to her apartment she made some tea along with Scottish biscuts. Kirsten told Francis that she needs to take a shower due to being on a schedule so he waited for her. Kirsten got her Victoria Secret Lingerie then walks into her bathroom, turns on the water,and takes off ger clothes and the doorbell rings "I'll get it!" Kirsten said as she ran to her closet and threw on her housecoat. Looking through the lookout Francis asks "Who is it?" "The pizza man but I did not order any pizza!" When she opens the door the pizza man asked are you Makalya Jones?" She said "No, I'm Kirsten. As she shut the door his foot had stop it. "What are you doing ? You have the wrong number?" she said. He drop the pizza and took out a gun and pistol slap her " I know!" he said with an evil smirk. Francis got up off the chair and ran to her "What are you doing?" he said. "My job!" the guy said."This was not part of the deal you weren't suppose to hurt her!"...

Signing Off,
Dominique Watson
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